Made the questions less confusing to a newbie.

When I first started looking at Worg, I was very confused about what it
was.  This page didn't draw a very clear distinction between org-mode
and Worg.

worg-about.org

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 #+STARTUP:    align fold nodlcheck hidestars oddeven lognotestate
 #+SEQ_TODO:   TODO(t) INPROGRESS(i) WAITING(w@) | DONE(d) CANCELED(c@)
 #+TAGS:       Write(w) Update(u) Fix(f) Check(c) 
-#+TITLE:      I said: "Hello Worg!"
+#+TITLE:      About Worg
 #+AUTHOR:     Worg people
 #+EMAIL:      mdl AT imapmail DOT org
 #+LANGUAGE:   en
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@
 
 [[file:index.org][{Back to Worg's index}]]
 
-* What is Org?  What is Worg?
+* What is Worg?  What is its relation to Org?
 
 [[http://www.orgmode.org][Org]] is an [[http://www.gnu.org/software/emacs/][Emacs]] mode for /keeping notes, maintaining to-do lists, and
-doing project planning with a fast and effective plain-text system./
-(as the [[http://www.orgmode.org/org.html][Org manual]] says.)
+doing project planning with a fast and effective plain-text system/
+(as the [[http://www.orgmode.org/org.html][Org manual]] says).
 
-Worg is an attempt to /collectively/ build a knowledge database about [[http://orgmode.org][Org]],
-planning in plain text and other related topics.
+Worg is a /collectively/-built knowledge database about [[http://orgmode.org][Org]],
+planning in plain text, and other related topics.
 
 * Why use Org-mode for creating a collaborative website?
 
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ HTML, LaTeX, or DocBook.
 Because Org is also a powerful *task-management system*.  Hopefully sharing
 a [[file:worg-todo.org][TODO file]] will make it easy for everyone to know where he could help.
 
-* So it's a bit like a wiki, no?
+* So Worg is a bit like a wiki, no?
 
 No.  Yes.  Kind of.  Here are a few differences:
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ No.  Yes.  Kind of.  Here are a few differences:
   file (=worg-todo.org= in the Worg directory) to your =org-agenda-files= and
   see your list of task populated by tasks added by other people...
 
-* Who can participate?
+* Who can participate in the editing of Worg?
 
 Everyone with a minimal knowledge of Org (and Emacs) and git.  See the
 page describing how to use [[file:worg-git.org][git for editing Worg]] for details.
@@ -61,35 +61,26 @@ page describing how to use [[file:worg-git.org][git for editing Worg]] for detai
 It's better to register on http://repo.or.cz/reguser.cgi but you can
 also add changes to the Worg repository anonymously.
 
-* So, what will be the content of this website?
+* So what is contained in Worg?
 
-Everything related to Org, project planning in plain text and the Org
+Everything related to Org, project planning in plain text, and the Org
 community.  Go crazy!
 
-* Who are these people?
+* Who's in charge of Worg?
 
 Worg was started by [[http://www.cognition.ens.fr/~guerry/][Bastien]]
 in the hope that other Org-ers around will bite into this and start
 sharing tutorials, example of codes, etc.
 
-Worg is currently maintained by [[file:users/mlundin.org][Matt
-Lundin]]. Feel free to [[mailto:mdlATimapmailDOTorg][contact him]] if
+Worg is currently maintained by [[file:users/mlundin.org][Matt Lundin]]. Feel free to [[mailto:mdlATimapmailDOTorg][contact him]] if
 you have any questions about the site.
 
-* OK, I want to start now!
+* OK, I want to contribute to Worg now!
 
-The first thing you need to know is [[file:worg-git.org][how to use
-git for Worg]].
+The first thing you need to know is [[file:worg-git.org][how to use git for Worg]].
 
 The second thing you might be interested in is general advice and
 conventions on how to [[file:worg-editing.org][let Worg grow]].
 
 If you're interested in knowing how Worg publishes itself as a website,
 check the [[file:worg-setup.org][Worg setup]] page.
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